Thursday, October 12, 2006
It was October 31 (Halloween) at 9:30P.M. Susi and I decided to go camping in Malibusa, a place that no one had been. (1) There we saw an old house with, destroyed windows, without door, and with bare trees. After we passed the house, we saw the same house again with the same characteristics, so I was very scare. 30 minutes passed and we keep seeing the same house until the last moment that we cant support more and stop in a place and camp in the middle of nothing.(2) When we where going to sleep the floor was uncomfortable, rusty, and dirty so we couldn't sleep well. (3)In the middle of the night Susi heard strangest sounds, many of it like a cat was scratching a door, someone was approaching up to us, a cup of glass was broking, and like if someone was getting a sword to fight. So Susi and me get scared and start packing up to go again to the city, but we couldn't because the sound was getting closer and closer to us and we were more scare when we heard more. When we look back there was a black cat with gray stripes, so after that we weren't scare so much. After 10 minutes that we finish packing we heard the sound again and it wasn't the cat because the cat was we us.(4) So Susi and I were thinking is that sound only of our imagination?, is that a ghost or something by the style?, is that a person trying to kill us!!, we didn't know so we had a decision and it was that the both of us enter to the house and take a pick to see if there was any sound coming from there. So the both of us enter the house. Before,(6) we take some speed, we were like rockets on course. When I enter strange people where there and I only saw a shadow so I was about to scream!! but when I saw the light going on!!...... It was Susi and other friends doing me a joke!!! they tell me if I was scared and if I couldn't afford that and the only thing I did was to scream at them saying(5)"YESSSSSS", and because of my scream, they scream and run because I make them to be scare because of my big scream. Finally when we get to the city again I was very surprised on what stupid joke I have fallen. When I get to my house I saw another strange thing so I tell my self" okay stop doing jokes" but it wasn't a joke.
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